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To the Flesh Grinder by ~Adoir:iconAdoir:





Masses of innocence
Trudge down the path
to their demise
The Flesh Grinder consumes all
Meat, bone and organs
They are all shredded within'
and sprayed over the battlefield

The entire world is drowning
Drowning in its own blood
The war continues for eternity
As innocence dies
and terror rises like the undead

The population dies
As we eat each other alive
Instinctual rage
Is all that is known
No remorse
Not a single weakness shown
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I know its short but I think its still pretty good.

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:iconneonatat7:
[link] I like it. Its deep dark and has alot of truth behind it. Good work. ^_^
:iconadoir:
Well its not really meant to be metaphorical, but thanks.

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The pile of shit before you, came out of your own ass.
:iconneonatat7:
You should post more.
:iconadoir:
For this poem or just poems in general?

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The pile of shit before you, came out of your own ass.
:iconneonatat7:
Both dude. Your a great writer.
:iconadoir:
Haha, well I'm satisfied with what is there and more will be coming eventually. I just need inspiration or what I produce will be crappy.

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The pile of shit before you, came out of your own ass.
:iconneonatat7:
Yeah i know the feeling lol. I just started using my account so i have only one thing lol.

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